the deepening sadness surprised me
wrapping me in sorrow with depth
it was an abyss of learning
growth is yet to be seen
evocative honesty hurts
but a lie would be known before it roll from the tongue
a serious invitation to tell the truth is before you
cos your eyes don't lie
whittling away my faith in you
secrecy isn't so secret
when it's written on your face
indiscreet? no, just rude
forgivable lust, is not falling in love with a whore
she will break your heart
then my tears for you will flow
but by then my love of you would be cold
Rated for Mature(17+)
whittle
Bookmark
Summary:
love, fidelity
Copyright @ All rights reserved








awesome. I love the deep set push and pull of this, Crims. It’s a great telling of an age-old situation, to love (openly) or to not.
Great write.
hello dearest Styxian thank you I hate this part of me but if you knew me you would no unconditional love is extended to a fault…I don’t want my heart to break or his…but sometimes they do…break I deeply appreciate you ❤️
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write with depth and layers my friend. Heartbreak never seems to break cleanly it usually splinters on both parties involved. Feelings always tend to get complicated somehow at least that’s my opinion. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian