She’ll tell you that he left her
I say he just left
She’ll tell you that he belonged to her
I say that’s pretty ridiculous
She says he’ll be completely lost without her
Well I don’t know about that
I’m talking about her Miniature Schnauzer
I don’t know what the fuck you were thinking of….
I think you are talking about .. Nevermind.
Thanks my friend.
this is too funny dearest Keith ❤️
Thank you Brenda. xo
Comedic gold, Keith. Excellent write my friend. I dig this one brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you my friend. Didn’t see your comments until now.
You caught me, dear Keith! I admit that I was also expecting some kind of sentimental break up story. The ending is priceless. Well done, my friend!
Greetings Elke. Nice to see & hear from you. Thanks for the kind words. xo
“I don’t know what the fuck you were thinking of…” is the ideal ending: direct, insolent, aware of the trick it just pulled. It’s humor that doesn’t apologize, that doesn’t soften the impact. It simply delivers the punchline and lets readers laugh at their own assumption. It’s a short text, but with impeccable comedic engineering. Thanks Keith!
Beautiful feedback PAR. Your words inspire. Thank you my dear friend.