some days I feel so far away
because no one hears silent screams
so detached from my mind
i’ll accept with time
there’s no place for me
I feel so real yet so fake
no one finds the time to think
about my feelings about my past
but then again that’s how I am
one day I’ll be so all alone
and I’ll be happy in my 2D world
no one to help me or save me
just an empty space to call my own
I’m worried when I’m happy
and I am open when I’m mad
the things that build me also break me
something that I don’t understand
when I’m in love I’m invincible
when I’m not I’m broken
can’t seem to keep anyone close
sometimes everything’s a loss to me
one day I’ll be so all alone
and I’ll be happy in my 2D world
no one to help me or save me
just an empty space to call my own
maybe I should get therapy
or try relating
though I rather face the facts
I’m better off floating away into the void
far away from people
I’m just not good with goodbyes
my issues run strong but I hold on
and I do, and I do!!!
“The things that build me also break me”
That line is on repeat in my head. What have you done to me????
Phenomenal ink, my friend.
Haha. The more you gain the more you have to lose. Thanks for the read, friend.
Stellar writing and great flow. Thank you for sharing.
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the read.
I agree with what Adira said…that line is haunting…
It is one that will always be true. Thanks for the read, friend.
Powerfully penned, Nick. Nice flow. Appreciate you.
Damian
So raw and visceral….you are a terrific writer…your writings connect so well with the readers 😊