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Read MoreOkay, Renee, The next shot is the whiskey shot. And I’m telling you, I’m feeling the waves of danger rolling off him over here.” Elene said. Looking over her shoulder at him.“ Your feeling the waves?” I said, smiling...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you for even reading my work. Never rush cuz, we are good
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
Nice one, Damian. A beautiful women can put a man under a spell that makes him forget any pain.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Very true, totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those are amazing lyrics. Love it;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Still working on the music, especially the vocals. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian this is a very great song I can feel your pain❤
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Second stanza, first line, did you mean “you’re”?
The repetition really works. And the shield me stanza is so clever and just rolls off the tongue.
Good, good piece of writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jacob. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Yes, I did mean “you’re” nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Awesome! The rhymes and lyrics are infectious. Like an abscess in a tooth! Nice work dude!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It’s got music as well, though I’m still working on the music. I’ll let you check it out when it’s completed, nice to see you my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
The interesting thing about this one is that, depending on how it’s read, it could be a woman or an addiction. Very clever use of words here, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Nice catch, you’re on the right path. It has a lot of meanings to me as well. This is the song I’m currently putting music to. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Can heat it already. Great work. Good luck on the solo album.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thank you, I need all the luck I can get. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some people shy away from a poem that’s composed of rhyme. I’ve always felt that there’s a finesse to it that has to be refined like a piece of art. You have that quality. It speaks volumes, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. What a lovely comment, so kind of you. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The lyrics are so lovely, I feel the intensity of the emotions…the push and pull, the thrill and the ache. and the repeated chorus of “sweet novocain” lingers like a haunting, addictive melody. I’d love to hear you sing this. It’s beautiful
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well vocally I’m doing my best, I’m not the greatest singer. lol. I’ll share the song when it’s complete. Thanks so much for your support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like that it has multiple meanings, I always dig those kind of writes. Bon Jovi style, that’s a unique way of putting it, but
I like it. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.Damian
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I sense there is more to this than presently meets the eye .. Good luck with production .. I suspect it will do well ..
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I will admit there are multiple meanings to this one. That’s the beauty of words, In my opinion. I need all the luck I can find, thanks for offering some. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My absolute pleasure ..
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Read MoreStrum me a lullabyto keep my mind at easeHold each note as it criestill I begin to sleepEach note is a storypressed and released in timeHold each fret in its gloryMove it slightly up or down. DevinePlay it soft...
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
A touching tribute to music and musician. This may be the best compliment that a guitar player could ever expect. A feeling of peace and satisfaction is elicited in me.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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When I’m practicing guitar a little later, I’ll play you a few bars. 😉
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Aww thank you;))
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In G I’m thinking. 😉
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Maybe on a minor key?
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Oh my… Choices. lol
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
Excellent poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Now that was a song all on its own!
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Thank you, Willow ;)) <3
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Oh, my–are you talking to me? I’m being silly, of course. I’ve been playing guitar for a long time, so these words have special meaning. I love the image of this damsel being moved by the sound of the strings. Who knows what will happen at intermission?
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Oh Sam… Intermission is where the stories are created. Thank you
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This flows like a melody. Great piece Fia.
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Thank you so much ;))
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Very nicely poemed Ma’am .. Neville
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Thank you, Neville;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I always loved this one, cuz. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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Read MoreWhen dreams come at you, Fast & Furious And reality is the second All I want is you? Never did I say anything other than I want you on this bed naked. I want to take you so many ways that even God...
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Great piece, Fia! Wonderfully hot What a fortunate person you’ll be with on that Saturday night!
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Thank you, RPM
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Well….need a follow to this hot story.
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Let’s see what happens, Peter.😚
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hello beautiful Fia this is so searingly sexy❤
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crismsin that video was hot. Loved it. Thank you.
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Seductively penned, Fia. This write was fire, cuz. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian;))
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Read MoreSitting there watching my friends waiting for the next story. I couldn't help a smile that flitted across my face.“Okay, what was that? You just gave a quick smile, thinking I don't watch you, girl. Fess up.” Joni said...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Sorry, it took me a bit to get to read this. Excellent storytelling my friend, you are truly amazing, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian