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Ooo, did it now. Nice;)
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I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x
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Thank you Hjx
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Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.
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Thank you ..I appreciate that Vision;))
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A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!
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Haha, thank you M.E;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Key
When did you get the key to my door
It’s been locked for so long
I remember when I put the bolt and nail it to the floor
Fear and hurt infused the metal like a song
You inserted a key
Turned it to the right
I stood before you
I the softest moonlight
You really looked at me
Realizing what I was w…Read More
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What a subtle erotic poem Fia. The key turns, oh the possibilities!! -Curt
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Thank you. I wanted to play on using object as terms for intimacy
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Read MoreTo dance in the shadowswhere the current hums.Dancing to watch the fire risein a pen whose words are not mine.Yet I write.......And with each strokethe page is lava.The page is a strangerI will never touch.But still I write.......The pen...
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write my friend. Sometimes all you can do is enjoy the ride when it comes to writing. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian! Happy Friday to you!
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This is good Brandon. I love seeing how people write about the pen and paper experience.
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I appreciate that! How many times have any of us sit and looked at something we wrote and were gobsmacked wondering where it came from?
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I love the repetition of “I write” in this. It highlights each of the longing thoughts perfectly. Much enjoyed!
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Thank you 🙂
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Sometimes it flows and sometimes it’s a struggle.
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Thank you! 🙂
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definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think