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Read Moredwells in silence fortitudefor a love between twoone is distant and closed off from viewthe other smitten intimately confidinga friendship of the eternalfate to cast each at oddsthe pendulum swings there is mistrusta mistress of the night, a lady...
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hello dearest Keith good afternoon thank you graciously I am enjoying my afternoon after receiving a house of thosand corpses book by Rob Zombie❤
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Very cool. I heard about this book. Rock on Brenda!!! xo
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Wistufl, whimsical and a conflict of emotions battling within this stunning piece. The imagery is on full throttle.
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously for the thoughts on this piece it is often difficult for witches to remain friends❤
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Sort of like a dissention among the ranks vibe. This does have a witchy, almost horror scented feel to it. Nice!
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I love your interpretation I miss this witchy friend of mine but we are trouble together❤
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Don’t know where my fingers went, Crimsin. I meant “wistful”—getting jumbled in my old age.
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that’s okay I understand I get to typing too fast lol❤
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Read MoreStrum me a lullabyto keep my mind at easeHold each note as it criestill I begin to sleepEach note is a storypressed and released in timeHold each fret in its gloryMove it slightly up or down. DevinePlay it soft...
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A touching tribute to music and musician. This may be the best compliment that a guitar player could ever expect. A feeling of peace and satisfaction is elicited in me.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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When I’m practicing guitar a little later, I’ll play you a few bars. 😉
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Aww thank you;))
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In G I’m thinking. 😉
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Maybe on a minor key?
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Oh my… Choices. lol
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Excellent poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim
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Now that was a song all on its own!
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Thank you, Willow ;)) <3
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Oh, my–are you talking to me? I’m being silly, of course. I’ve been playing guitar for a long time, so these words have special meaning. I love the image of this damsel being moved by the sound of the strings. Who knows what will happen at intermission?
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Oh Sam… Intermission is where the stories are created. Thank you
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This flows like a melody. Great piece Fia.
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Thank you so much ;))
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Very nicely poemed Ma’am .. Neville
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I always loved this one, cuz. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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The ending ties it all together well. And I agree with the mic drop line.
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hello dearest James I’m happy you liked this one I was unsure anyone would you are deeply appreciated❤
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Read MoreSundial across water to the dark hills seeking solace in solstice rhymes and sunken Heavens beneath my feet Hope slowly swims as dementia moving softly upstream promenade lights enfold into lighthouse wombs, not everything born has to shine Dark clouds hang as an executioner's smile across harbour...
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hello dearest Ghost this is a feeling work of art❤
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Thank you Crim. The words are over 2 decades old and they are as distant as my feelings for her. It’s important to not get shackled to the past, otherwise they define and cause misery. I moving to foreign lands, so my stay on this site will be brief.
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Brilliance Brenda. You’re a magnificent poet my friend. Spellbound!!! xoxo