“they distort sex, drugs, and even God” That is 100%. Good piece

I sometimes wonder if you realize in the writing how prophetic and on point your observations are. We had more than an inkling at the time of inking, but who could have predicted how awful it would get? And they’re not done yet. This is a beast of a powerhouse, my friend

Interesting in how such a write could be penned in the 1960s, til now. It’s a never ending cycle of promises and BS, with military interventions along the way. We the people just try to eek out a decent life, as unscathed as possible.
Intuitive write, sir. Prophetic.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It would make great lyrics, you never know with me, it could end up going down that way. Appreciate you, brother.

Damian

Some things just have to be said out loud and wrapped in poetry .. it’s too hard to write them in stone .. Nice one Damian

Hey amigo. Everything is so unstable and messed up. I’m just trying to get through my day feeling like a decent person. It’s all too much. And I feel it in this write. Well done

This reminds me of the book 1984. They’re changing history through numerous means and we’re all suffering under it. Good one, Damian.

Powerfully penned, Brandon. Another excellent write chalked full of honesty my friend. Muses are fickle sometimes that’s for sure. I can relate to this one. Appreciate you.

Damian

Damian took my sentiment. Muses can be a righteous pain in the ass sometime. (He said it nicer. lol) Nicely done

Ooof, I have been there! When she refuses to show, we’re left high and dry. Pun intended. Perfectly executed

hello dearest Brandon this is very powerful honestly I feel helpless to the future and presnt great write ❤️

Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love that this allows for no external input. It’s between you and them, nobody else invited.

A poem of love and longing. Beautiful!

hello beautiful Fia this is very passionate something about the undertones were menacing or I’m reading it wrong powerful emotions ❤️

Aww this is sweet and salty! Haha
I loved the swag in this!

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with passion and power my friend. Nicely done as always, great read. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Nice! Simple and direct. The best kind of poetry for any day. I like that you chose to write this, and post it. Awesome!

Absolute commitment to another. Knowing you were created for them, the person of your choice, to be taken in ways that the world will never understand, nor do you care that they understand. If the other knows what love and heated passion is about, you shouldn’t have to wait long.

A very honest piece of writing, using precise words to deliver your wants, needs, and desires.