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Read MoreThat last day with you,the sunset in your eyes,a moment so delicate,like a candle in the wind.Though the candle flamesbehind your eyes had beenpinched by the ice-coldfingers of death.A candle in the darkness,the flamelight of your formlessspirit. We all...
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Read MoreCome to me,in that long stride and sway of your walkwhich incites anticipation.Your eyes though reach me first –Oh, the intensity of your gaze.Such concentration of powerand compassion within those pearly eyes,I cannot help but be stunned and awed.Come...
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Read MoreChinatown Blues Teatime in Chinatown Where the old men play MahjongWhile reciting Lao Tzu over ramen noodlesWhose Tao is a Macau séanceFor spirits of ancestorsLike the memory of an opium den In a dream for a wizened apothecaryBearded in ashen...
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This made me think of those mystery/thriller Mr. Wong movies from the 1930’s-1940’s starring Boris Karloff or Bela Lugosi. Amazing detail and atmosphere. Great!
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Love that comparison, my friend. I have heard of but not yet seen the Mr. Wong movies. Most grateful for your review. Love that the atmosphere came through for you. I thank you from my heart.
John
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Beautifully penned, John. Fantastic wordplay and incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thank you so much Damian. Very glad you enjoyed my wordplay and imagery. Appreciate you very much.
John
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Oh…I’m coming..on my way…lol This is very good and enticing piece.