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hello dearest John thank you he was a part my heart and he was so young to go he will be missed 💕
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Your poetry captures so much in just a few stanza’s. Your words are beautiful and heartbreaking. Nice tribute to your son Brenda. xoxo
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hello dearest Keith thank you for the love here it’s felt 💕
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What a beautifully expressed tribute, Brenda
Much respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir you would have liked him I believe he was a lot of fun thank you for the love 💕
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I feel this one in my bones…As a mom, I know dam well that no amount of writing can take away the pain…Having that said, this is beautifully written and it gives hope that while appart, you are still connected…
Jade xox-
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hello beautiful Jade thank you for the love here no writing is a help but I fear the emotions that keep rising 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love 💕 it’s appreciated…
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Write it out, Brenda. You honor him with your love. Write it out ❤️
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for the love I feel like he doesn’t want me to be sad and I want to write and I did today but I know no matter what write the sadness is going to come forth I deeply appreciate you 💕
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We all are connected to those who leave us in death.
I still feel my father on my shoulder when I need guidance and my mom was right about everything. Both gone, but live in my heart.Your son will always be with you.
He had a beautiful smile.Condolences and remembrances Brenda
I feel you
🖤💙💓🤠
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hello dearest Poet good morning I think so too that we are connected I can hear him talking to me and I feel him close he is on to a new life but doesn’t want me to be sad thank you for the love here 💕
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Read MoreLust in the candlelight, light that's radiant, where the hot, dripping wax flows. The candlight simmering, the flamelight on our bare bodies, the golden bronze effect of the light on our skin as it glistens with sweat. Cuddled now, hot and sweaty, your body tremors against mine in anticipation...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. An amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sensational! You’ve illustrated such a lovely image here.. in the words of my friend, PoetSpeak,
BIG LIKE
xx
~P.G💋
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Yes! I agree, let’s make sure those we love know how much we treasure them, while there is time.
Admittedly I struggled to read this through. The emotion is so incredibly palpable here, each word a pang of familiar grief.
If this is a personal loss for you – condolences , myfriend.
Clay
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hello Clay thank you it was my son of thirty six that is him in the picture I’m very sad that is the last statement to us all he is going to make please forgive me 💕
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Heartbreaking…
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thank you for being here dearest Keith 💕
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A thought shared by all for someone. 🌼
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thank you dearest Joe hugs 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A mother’s love is unconditional my friend. Truly am sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love 💕
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreMemories painted by a disgruntled brush Dysfunctional thoughts falling short of wise Won a game of poker with a busted flush I bluffed a demon who couldn’t read my eyes Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
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This is a clever write. After reading your work, I’m sure you could bluff a demon.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I would hope I could, in that situation. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice work my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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If you can be stoïc enough to successfully embody that poker face……maybe you are the demon…😉
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jade. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Interesting theory, maybe I need an exorcism. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m kinda hoping I remember how, in case I run into that demon again. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sparkling beautiful, my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIWhy share a bed,if not to meltlike sugar in warm teatwo bodies sweetening the same silence?IIDoes the moon riseonly to watch the earth sleep.No! It comes to touch,to stir tides in the dark.IIILet us not be strangerswearing the same...
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You take your grief and spill it into a poem of great remembrance and timeless ache for this soul who apparently left this earth all too soon. Lyrically beautiful and soulful vision of what he meant to you and how you heal from loss. Love this poem.
John