Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a hopeful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

That is all we can do. Try to smile and keep going. Nice poem.

I do this everyday. Great piece PAR.

Powerfully penned, PAR. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yup, I do see that. This is cool, Par

Love the personification.

Brenda, I cannot imagine the pain you’re going through. Losing a parent is nothing compared to losing a child. My heart and prayers with you. You can do him justice now for holding onto all the memories and writing about them. I hope that helps a lil’.

Daniel

Your beautiful tribute Brenda is heavenly. My thoughts go out to you. xo

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful Angel thank you what a tender and loving song…it’s very hard I keep remembering the day he was born and his milestones I miss him…I want to quit being sad but I don’t know how…I appreciate you listening 💕

This is a mind blowing piece. Well done.

Powerfully penned, Nick. Another level on this write, nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like this. The in-between verses enhance the piece very well.

I like different. Very much a high compliment for me.

Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

Love this. Your stories are intriguing and raw.

Uncompromisingly penned, Nick. Raw and to the point, and it goes on in the world today. Powerful work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hehe, in her own way yes. I kinda loosely based this off of a friend of mine. Though I made her sound like more of a slut haha. But she was very flirty, the life of the party kinda person. Whenever you could get her to talk seriously though it would be about how she was having a lot of family issues. Which showed me that the flirting was a bit of a way to deal with those emotions.

Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.