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Read MorePressing my chest against your backI lean to smell your lovely neckYour fragrant lotion entices meIt moistens your skin, so intoxicating!I’m so ready to be inside of you!You’re less certain, I must wait for youSo I reach for your...
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Thanks, Fia. And thanks for leading the way on providing comments on this site!
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You are welcome;))
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Love how the foreplay unfolds here so tenderly and not rushed. You write the scene with exquisite detail of sensual feelings and sensation. I could see it all so perfectly.
John
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So glad you could envision it John. Grateful for your comment!
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RPM and
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Read MoreWhen a calm sky turns grey And a whispered wind cuts When the peace you need to stay But vanishes like dust Every beauty on a rose Is kissed with lust The roots never grow Past the decayed crust Word sung in a resounding hymn Played with notes Eco'd...
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OMG…. This is one of your very very best
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Thank you, Sam😊
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This is an amazing poem, dear Fía!
Abracadabra: As I speak I create!-
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Thank you Sappho.😊
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Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.
Clay
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Thank you,Clay 😊
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Nicely done Fia…
Powerful excursion…
<#3 Cipher
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Thank you, Cipher 😊
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Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.
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Thank you, Jim😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ,Damian ☺️
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A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow
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Thank you, Willow;))
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This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.
Wonderful ink.
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Thank you, Nick. I love Poe’s work
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Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Read MoreIt was my third assignment for the Cohol Tribune. My boss thought it would be best for me to go and interview an upcoming environmentalist, named Caleb. Stewart. I didn't realize I would need to travel to Scotland for...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Wonderful storytelling, it kinda reminds me of a sitcom my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, I would love to write one of those someday.
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I enjoyed this. Comparing the kiss to drinking water is imaginative–I like it. I need to “see” the action in a story, and that was easy with this. Probably because I’m a very foolish (and hopeless) romantic, I feel bad when romance has to take a back seat to life goals. Maybe she’ll see him again?
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Thank you, Sam. She has to choose who she is going to be with among the shot glasses. I appreciate you reading this.
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Very, tender moment described so nicely.