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    void

    inside the silence weep for days undoneweep bitter tears for the covetdie a little for the touch I never hadkeen within the melancholy blueDecember romance, fate doesn't allowsummertime need isn't givendesire urges me furtherpassion to unfurl my darknessit is...

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    • Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.

      John

      • hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️

    • Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol

      • hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️

    • Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!

      • thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️

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    Daniel Long wrote a new post

    A White Petal

    I have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...

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    • Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.

      John

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Daniel Long wrote a new post

    Venus

    You rise in the twilight for I too bask in the dark. While I desire the burning day star, I thrive in the night.   You are ornamented with hues of Hell, Heaven, lust, and purity. I embellish the hues of an angel’s velvety...

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    • This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.

      John

    • Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!

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    Fia Naturie wrote a new post

    Time

    You think I don't care I care too much You think I'm not here I'm here in the cuts When you reach out your hand I took it in mine I don't understand Why can't I take some time I won't be gone long I doubt you’ll even...

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    A Mess

    I say hihow are you? how's it going?just seems I'm the only onewhen did everyone get so impersonal?every conversation ends in awkward silenceam I brain dead or just different?special but not in a special kind of waycry baby, pull...

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    • No one wants to be the one to say hi first. Everyone thinks that the other person has a hidden agenda. This is an interesting outlook. Never wanted to be a boss. You know I talked with people in charge and some said that they felt the same way.

      • I try to tell myself that those thoughts are just delusions. But the mind does play tricks.

        Thanks for the read friend.

    • Powerfully penned, Nick. It’s a different world out there, dig this write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Seems like there’s a mass apathy sweeping the human race these days. Smile & get blank eyes. Or a frown. It’s rather disheartening…I find myself becoming more reclusive everyday. Not a good thing either, but at least alone explains the silence. Great reflection

      • Honestly I wish I could just lock myself in my house. I get so tried of people. It has become a hostile world.

        Thanks for the read friend.

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