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Read MoreThe wind, a phantom legion, howled its ancient song, Through skeletal branches, where dead leaves clung. A tempest brewed, a symphony of dread, whispering secrets of the long since dead, The house, a wounded beast, with shutters torn and weak,...
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hello beautiful Willow good afternoon thank you graciously for the love on this we both appreciate it deeply ❤️
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
I said I don’t do this. poems that behave
that count their beats and beg to sound profound
but here I am the fool you couldn’t save
all rhyme and reason. love still hangin roundI hate this form. it’s polished. cold. confined
like scrubbin blood just so it stains again
I tell myself to leave your heart behind
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Read MoreI recall my first touchof the most intimate youthe back seat of the vana blanket to conceal the viewI sneaked my young handsbeneath the waist of your clothesand reached down with my fingersdestination unknownyou were so youngI didn’t know...
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Wow! That was a very sensual reminiscence. You really brought the imagery here
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Thank you, Willow. I’m glad you could see it!
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Hoi hoi
Wow! If this isn’t a declaration of love, I don’t know what is.
What a beautiful write!
A great thing you posted it!Kind regards, Gus
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Thank you for seeing this piece as it is, a declaration of love. I appreciate you!
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I enjoy writing about this type of memory. Thanks for reading! Always grateful for your visits and comments.
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Loss of innocence written with impressionist imagery that captivate me as I read. Very well done indeed.
John
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Exceptional ink my friend .. thank heaven for memories eh & of course for poetry .. Neville 😎👍
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Detritus and
kesnerfreds are now friends
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So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.
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good mornig dearest Keith I’m happy you liked it I was worried I went too far but I never worried about that before why start now right? thank you my friend ❤️
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Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌