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Read Moreit lays in my lap... closed... and anything but silent... it's speaking still... my hands resting reverently upon the cover... as a flood of emotions... and memories... pour from my eyes she said it... and I felt it... at every single level... from the surface of thought... to the tiniest molecule...
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Thank you, Fia
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Another excellent write with deep layers of emotion and honest storytelling my friend. This one hits harder than a freight train. I concur with everyone above. You took this one to another level. Outstanding read as always. Appreciate you, Sis.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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You can feel desperation and perseverance in every line. Simply stunning.
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Thank you, Brandon
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Thank you, Peter
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Thank you, Light 💕
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Excellent. Obviously I enjoy story poems the most. It’s in the way it brings the real world into something we all can sense too.
Life is like that, and so writing can be a journal of experience too. This write fills that niche really well.
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This flows like a cascading waterfall.
So much power in each line that it pushes into the next.
Just wow.
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Read More“Me and trifling bitches like oil and water don’t mixThat is why with those ignorant motherfuckas I always refuse them dick, “Fuck if they have a thick pussy and a fat assA bitch with an attitude...
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Hi
I just posted my thoughts a note to my son. Whom to fuck. Great lines you have written in raw.I see you are budding poet. Because I see your thoughts connect with a lesson and reality.
Jessy Jacob
Do drop review on my posts..
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I will. And thank you for reading and commenting.
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Read MoreCasketSharpe “A woman with an STD is nothing but food poison for the pussy Future date for the clinic and pissing in burning misery, “But a bitch will swear up and down the test results are lyinIn...
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Hi
I see now scared of chicken to eat.. what made you to draw that horror pic. Anyways I stopped eating chicken. Seeing the cruelty to human i thought I crime will reduce with me stop eating meat.
I see why we are undecided did you decide everything for me no how do I enforce you your heart your way to get what you want where did you give me choice I decided i know you are there fir me but was unaware the way. Remember you have given word and i know love shall show the way. Why do you want my decision you have your own decision. Come with flying colors not with depressed eyes…
Jessy Jacob
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That is why we as individuals have free will. How one uses it is an individuals choice.
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Read MoreSee hope Where there is despair See warmth where there is coldness see the tides change subtle but with strength When one says they are fine See the truth Confusion has clouded the mind and practice smiles can fool the best proficient optimist Off into the horizon Where two blues meet Darkness...
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I love that you chose a positive message to write of. There is never enough of that. So thank you! And the write is well crafted, full of inspiring lines to lift the reader up. Great idea and great result, Fia.
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Thank you Styxian:))
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Great thoughtful writing Fia.
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Thank you Peter;)
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with lots of deep layers my friend. Nicely done. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian;)) cuz
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This does have a positive feel to it.
You never know, sometimes acknowledging someone who’s struggling could impact their day in a positive way.
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Thank you Adel;))
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I think that too often people know it’s a mask, but they want to believe it’s reality. Because having to see what makes them uncomfortable is more than they’re willing to take on. So we paste on the smile and say we’re fine, and they eagerly choose to believe it so they don’t have to acknowledge the truth. I love that the message in this is to see beyond the surface
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Willow…the words od not come to me and I am a chatter box. Amazing spill of emotions.