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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Great storytelling, nice imagery, dig the wordplay as well. Fantastic read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian