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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
God
Shower you children with
Gifts
You gave then different gifts
Some are good in writing poems
Other’s are good in carpentry
Other’s are good gardeners
They also have a green thumb
Every thing grows beautiful
In their garden
Today you children are working in the
Garden
First they remove the weeds
It is a horrible job to do
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Read MoreHe sat in the doorway Of the dead superstore The rain fell over the night His guitar has no strings He plays on Feeling the notes Strumming the rhythm No sound but the rain He moans out the chords To the empty street Muffled by the rain
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Thanks for reading. Yes a nightmare vision in a future I hope never comes.
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Wow! This is good. I loved that image of playing on a guitar with no strings. Its so strong and full of nostalgic and sorrowful emotions. Well done!
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Thanks for reading. Visions of a dark future are never far from my mind.
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James
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Totally awesome write. Guitars with no strings. I like that! Strumming to the rhythm. Great atmosphere. Well said
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Thanks for reading.
I am plagued with harrowing visions of future.
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James
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group Published Authors
Stop before you break God’s heart
People
Because God doesn’t like that at all
Also God want to be respected
By you
Please also don’t mistreat my God
Because he doesn’t like that
Also don’t let God down
If you make a promise to God
You should keep it
God is the one that you created
You in his image
Also you are one of Gods child
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Stop before you break God’s heart
People
Because God doesn’t like that at all
Also God want to be respected
By you
Please also don’t mistreat my God
Because he doesn’t like that
Also don’t let God down
If you make a promise to God
You should keep it
God is the one that you created
You in his image
Also you are one of Gods child
God…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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I am happy that you enjoyed reading my poem
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Playing a guitar with no strings in the rain…That is sorrowful.