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    Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month

    he knows the sound of my breath
    as it catches
    hovering over his words
    like a hummingbird
    imbibing
    on the intoxicating nectar
    of his expression

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    Whispered Intensity

    he knows the sound of my breath as it catches hovering over his words like a hummingbird  imbibing on the intoxicating nectar of his expression

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    • This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it

      • Thank you 😊 It was stupid o’clock in the morning so it’s short, but it says what’s important to me

    • For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.

    • Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • This one had a lot to say with just a few words. I just went with what I felt. Thank you, my friend 😊

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    NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month

    A RED INVITATION
    I love the way it feels
    When no one sees
    These miserable hills
    A dark sky… hidden in black seas

    Can you see where I am? (Where I am?)
    This place understands….
    It knows my story… how it began…
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    Falling…. Is a Red In-vi-tation….

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    “This is lyrics I personally wrote about depression that weighs heavier than stones… This is a very beautiful song and I wrote it for all who need that powerful voice to know that depression is part of God’s plan to challenge you’re inner faith. An invitation to find God and not give up. For all things happen for a reason. ” No little or speck of Ai in this pen.”

    "DEPRESSION IS IS PART OF GOD'S PLAN"

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