I love the second Stanza.

so lovely dearest Daniel I love the juxtaposition of the raven and angel wings 💕

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Another amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I sincerely wish the bookmark worked for me, but try as I might it doesn’t. This will be permanently bookmarked in my mind though

hello dearest Benny I guess I love our terrible creator because he is terrible like me of me like him…he never leaves me alone though the godly people abandones me right away… you can only do your best and life isn’t a fairy tale I get it with the memories 💕 great write…

I wouldn’t mind if we did away with platitudes altogether. It’s entirely too easy for people to quote one of them at you without really thinking of any sort of meaningful response that might better fit the situation.

“Love & light” or “positive vibes only” also come to mind. Toxic positivity is a real issue….people have to be able to grieve, to get frustrated and angry and complain on occasion. These are unpleasant things that all humans must experience.

One of my least favorite to hear is “be yourself”, which too often means “confirm my biased opinions of you”.

No one’s world is a straight line. Nicely written

hello beautiful Green we are all snow flakes one of a kind lovely write 💕

Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Tight rhyming, well done Damian.

Superb poet you are, Damian. Love your work. Bravo!

Daniel

”It’s for the love of the write I’m still here”

I can vibe a whole poem to this alone, my bro
It all resonates with me.

Much respect

Naaj

That last stanza Damian took home for me. Nice

This is such a powerhouse of writing. That last stanza seriously resonated with me. Especially that last freaking line. Mic drop, my friend