He wrote that? It’s really good.

Dear P,

I really appreciated dreaminess of this piece. It has a great meter and I liked the plot twist at the end. It reminds me no matter what we are in life there’s a poet in all of us. Lovely share. H🌷

I’m loving that this was captured so honestly and with simplicity that makes it very special. Thank you for sharing. Those are treasures that must be kept in the family for a long long time.

This is so dark and haunting. fav line is “Their shrill shadowed the echo through these hollow halls,
“The dark-suited burial conveyance led amiss of a poet’s demise.”

The cinderella comparison had me saying aww even though I was smiling while reading this piece

A lovely write. Well written with some great rhymes!

Very good. I just read that Musk said that death is faulty design and in the future we will figure out how to fix it.

Thanks Fia.
Don’t normally agree with Elon but he is right that death will be eventually defeated by science but probably only for the rich.
You wouldn’t want the poor living forever now ..would you.
Seriously,who really wants to live forever..not me.
💋

Cleverly penned, Peter. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian