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Read MoreI don’t know if you love me anymore.But I know I love you—and I still lust for you.Even after all these years,after the weight we’ve both carried,after the silence between us.I want you.I don’t know how to begin,as if...
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Thank you for your supportive comments Peter.
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The yearning is palatable. I hope it goes well.
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Read MoreThe bathroom filled quickly with steam, curling around the mirror and making the air thick and warm. She hugged herself, sweater still clinging to her arms, and looked at him uncertainly.“I’m cold,” she whispered.He hesitated, then reached for her...
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Read MoreThat Saturday night during her last year at college, she came home for the weekend. In his parent’s basement she curled up in the corner of the old rec room sofa, a blanket over her lap, while his parents...
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This is a sweet moment shared between them. I like the build-up. She must have spent the night there before, since his parents were ok with her being with him all night.
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Hoi hoi
Reading time 12 minutes?
It took me 24 minutes. I’ve read it with one hand!
Lovely piece of work!
Love that you wrote it. Love that you posted it.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thanks so much Gus. Happy that you found something in it!
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Thank you, Adria! Glad you stopped by.
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Read MoreShe slept turned gently on her side,Her back to him, her breathing deep.He lay behind her, hands still tiedBy fear and years and broken sleep.He longed to touch, to press, to feelThe shape he’d loved so long ago.But silence...
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Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.
Daniel
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Thanks for the amazing comment, you made my day!
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Echo the others
This is how erotica is writtenBravo !
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Thank you Poetspeak. I’m grateful that you spent time to read and comment.
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I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.
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Thank you so much. I know I have the tendency to straddle the line between erotica and porn, so I am appreciative of your comment.
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Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien! I value your support.
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This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully
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Thank you for your precious comment! Much appreciated!
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Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!
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” The years had left some tangled vines—
But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”Mic drop.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you…honored that you would read and comment
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I understand completely the words you put together about a subject I know quite well.
I’ve written similar pieces and shown my wife, hoping for a spark to keep the fire alight.
Hope your terrific composition has more success than mine.