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Read MoreIn the cancer year I bled like a thief, postmortem without a corpse The night she lost her hair tears of piers across the valleys crying for the days which will be no more, one bridge way too far When one was hurting silently the other one knew loudly; the afternoon deputy cancer-bastard pulled the shotgun...
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cancer is the loneliest hunter. thanks for the sentiments. fia
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Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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many thanks damian. of all the sites i have ever vistied, you are the most supportive & encouraging. says much about you as a person.
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That’s kind of you to say my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“When one was hurting silently
the other one knew loudly; ” – This is actually very clever and damn accurate. Props for that bit of genius.
The write itself is brutally honest and centered once for heart and once for the head. This is why I search your writes out, for the skill. Awesome write, Rob.-
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you are not exactly bereft of writing skills yourself my friend. far from it.
that’s twice cancer has sliced my heart. moving on with so much love delivered to my spine.
thanks too for the ‘comments’ insight.
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diolch H. when a kind soul such as yourself emotionally responds to my tatty words, it makes it worthwhile. eerie touched your heart, that is all we can ask in this trapeze and circus we call life. x
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
If you come back to me
You will make my day
Worth
my life is nothing without you
I need somebody
That can cheer me up
When I am feeling down
In the dumps
You say I should smile more often
Because I have a beautiful smile
Yes smile is the best medicine there is
You say I am too serious
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Read MoreI worked already9 hours for myFatherI having aCoffee breakAfter myCoffee breakI will return toWorkYes I share my poemsWith my FatherAnd my friendsAfter I finished writing my poemsMy reward meFor a well done jobAnd that makes meHappy
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Honestly penned, Aldo. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian
i will slowly write more new posts
I am happy that you enjoyed
My poem
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Thanks
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Read MoreClueless WinterIt is January againAnd we had ourFirst snowstormYes it was coming hardAnd that snow will stayOn the groundI am stacked insideYes it gets hard if IDon't shovel whileIt is coming downFrom the skyAlso it is very cold outYes...
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I know snowstorms that you have to shovel that soft moutain of white. Coming down is so soft and light but piled together it’s so heavy. Nice piece
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Powerfully penned, Aldo. Excellent write my friend. Sounds like a busy day. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Aldo Kraas and
Damian DeadLove are now friends
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