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Read MoreThe world is a bit colderThe street a bit emptierWithout your voiceWithout your hand to hold.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS and
Paula Jobi are now friends
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Read MoreMy eyes open, to the imagined. My eyes closed, to the real. My ears open, to hallucinations. My ears closed, to your voice. My mouth open, to ramblings. My mouth closed, to anything sensical. My hand open, once to yours. My hand closed, now to yours.
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Das ist ein sehr schönes Gedicht, Daniel! Ich kann mich absolut damit identifizieren.
The use of opposites is the perfect stylistic device to underline the fact that in our dreams and illusions we are most alive! Brilliant!
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Read MoreAmong a low-pitched, hypnotizing hum of stainless steel washers and dryers, next to a dingy neon light, he sits in his usual pea-green plastic chair and waits. His grey hair and beard rub along the collar of his wrinkled...
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This is so sad, and I can feel how much he misses her. Even the everyday mundane things stray to thoughts of her. Very good story,
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Thank you, Fia.
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Well, now, this is just a butt-kicker. You set the scene brilliantly, then proceed to serve up dose after dose of sadness. I feel this poor guy’s pain, and want to buy him a beer or something. I didn’t know you had this kind of writing in you. Hopefully, there’s more.
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Thank you so much for the comment, Sam. There’s just a couple more. 🙂
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Deep resonance of emotions here. Compelling literature that captures a night at the laundromat that is anything but ordinary. Original captivating and powerfully rendered. Your attention to detail of the scene and the character emotional response to the event unfolding before him is as touchingly developed as it is strong. Truly gifted prose writing.
John
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Thanks very much, John. 🙂
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Read More“When I don’t deal with ho’s they look at me like a menaceGetting pissed off that I won’t let them get with this, “Calling me gay and I’m a poster boy for homosexual dickNow they are gagging on...
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I can feel the anger in this piece. You cannot escape the hell you create.
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The funny thing is that the inspiration for this poem came from when the mailman didn’t put my package on my covered front porch and left it in the rain, after I talked to the motherfucker about it several times.
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Indeed, everything changes. I would suspect, or at least in my own life, the choice to switch what I am perceiving is all interconnected.