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thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
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thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
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Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
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thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️
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I wonder what exactly the reason for that is…
I think politically…and all those afraid to stand up against the King.
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So much information in our hands, so much time spent looking at our phones, never stopping to think deeply, before the next wave of information.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Regards James
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There are so many ways to take this…I like when a statement makes you think.
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Thanks for reading and thinking on the statement.
We live in strange times.
Regards James
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It seems you are indeed write sir .. and for wot it might be worth, I’ve thinked the same thing myself .. & often .. Neville
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I thought I replied. Sorry for not replying.
I think we are being guided towards idiocy. Because stupidity is profitable.
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No worries, my pleasure entirely .. Neville
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Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
We all made the deal. Time to live with it. Great time of year of reflect on that fact. Just bury my body down by the highwayside!! Hope everyone is doing great and ready for Autumn!!!
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I feel that you pulled a lot of Greek mythology inspiration here? I could be wrong. I like the piece
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Greco-Roman culture & philosophies, plus some New Testament references. Legionnaires, Roman soldiers with a particular skill at building roads, were not paid in gold but salt, which is where we derive the word ‘salary’. That might be somewhat of an urban legend, but it seems to be at least rooted in truth.
Great eye again, thank you!!
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Thank you;))
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I think many of us feel like machines. We work 9-5 jobs…like factory work, restaurant work…I did both.
Watched the clock…tried to have fun, but machines don’t laugh or cry.
This poem has a sense of rhythm that matches that routine…and the rhyme scheme is subtle but smart.Really enjoyed and felt this read….related from my days before I got lucky and found teaching.
j.
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Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.
Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
j.