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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
I said I don’t do this. poems that behave
that count their beats and beg to sound profound
but here I am the fool you couldn’t save
all rhyme and reason. love still hangin roundI hate this form. it’s polished. cold. confined
like scrubbin blood just so it stains again
I tell myself to leave your heart behind
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Read MoreThe Grim ReaperThe old woman was taking a walk through the forest, like she did every day before breakfast. She enjoyed the fresh morning air and the silence. There was hardly anyone outside at this early hour. To her...
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Thank you so much for reading and your kind comment, dear Keith! Your comments always tear my heart wide open with gratitude and awe!
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Quite the riveting tale, Sappho! It was very clever of you to switch up the common portrayals of death and love. I enjoyed all the natural references and surprises you sprinkled throughout this piece. Excellent write, my friend.
Clay
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Your kind comment and your appreciation makes me blush, dear Clay! Thank you very much!
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Read MoreSometimes I ask myself.How could you love someone like her?Broken,shattered glass. Nice personality but lower class.She's been through Hell and back.And so there is qualities she lack. They ask me,how could you love someone like him?His light ,his fire is so...
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If I could add this to a reading list, it would be at the top. Beautiful…
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So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.
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good mornig dearest Keith I’m happy you liked it I was worried I went too far but I never worried about that before why start now right? thank you my friend ❤️
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Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello Elke. Outstanding story. A stellar piece of writing that captures so much detail and intrigue. A perfect piece for this time of year. Well done my friend. xo