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Read MoreAs the evening stretches beyond skyscrapers sunset cracks windows and voices, midnight lies as a would-be lover counting her footsteps across Brooklyn Bridge to an anonymous apartment, where she imagines waking to her lipstick on his coffee cup Washing machine skies spin skeins of colour red always bleeds into the blue and JFK...
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As someone once sang, it’s been a good year for the roses. Heart upon heart, life below humility, Christmas 2025 once seemed a distance away. It was only true friendship & family who drove my sleigh. Maybe, one day, I will become a poem. Huge Welsh hugs and thanks H. x
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The opening catching one’s imagination as you tell us a story through poetry. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you Fia and many plaudits for your perennial encouragement of writers. Wising you a blessed yuletide.
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Well now, this is quite a large gift for us readers. Definitely weighty but not overdone. It brings so much to light, as you build the “Blade Runner” scenery throughout.
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Never considered the blade runner angle and this is why I always hope to submit on poetry sites. Everyone reads their own perspective. Thank you Mark.
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The original Blade Runner is a fantastic, epic movie. Your write belongs with it, including in value.
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Read Morelaughter of hate, inside me debating whether to stay or leavecallous affection is the affliction, as of latemorose of feeling, with lust shown for others and for me nonededicated need holds me to youa love that hurts dictates desireinside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Heartfelt write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
A thumbs up from the Netherlands.
And what do the world famous Macs says?
I’m loving it.
Your writes I mean. I’m not eating the Macs.
I hope your Tuesday will be marvellous, Gus
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Read MoreAs I lay back on the bed and I close my eyes I remove all questions out of my head from who to why I open a rift that allows me to slip deep within my mind The air...
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Demon guardian angel protecting you as you sleep. Interesting concept.
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Interesting you say, do you not know your guardian spirit? Again interesting
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When I was a kid I had a guardian angel picture hung over my bed courtesy of my mom.
It was guiding two children over a bridge.
As I got older i took it down to redecorate. I can’t find it now.
Maybe I ticket her or him off. lol but there are times I tune into certain vibes that give me warning
Signs before something goes down.Enjoyed the read Meme
Merry Christmas amigo!
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At one tomes we, humans, had a six sense or maybe even a seventh sense. It’s what kept humans alive for tis long, our ability to sense danger at times. We even had a stronger connection with nature and the spirit realm, and we trusted this connection. But with knowledge, the sciences in particular, we made the third eye lazy and calcify, breaking our connection. Merry Christmas and Happy New Years to you and yours Lady
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Read MoreI think that I am down, yes I'm downTo go fucking steady now, I'm ready nowBaby are you ready nowTo go fucking steady now I come with succulent moves and you know that I'm equipTo do what I do after...
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This is one of those midnight songs that you hear in a dark room. haha this is good me
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Well thank you Lady, much appreciation
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Read MoreHow do you allow someone into your heart that don't even care It's like a fucking wrecking ball has moved in there Baby, what have I done to cause this type of pain This love is so intense borderline...
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This sounds the person is hurt and confused about the situation. But still wants to hold on
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Lots of people in crazy situations find some sick pleasure in it, Thanks Lady
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Dear R,
The visual and imagined images are outstanding in this piece. For me, there such a sense of coping with life especially at Christmas. You incorporate iconic structures of NY throughout giving this an energetic current running underneath the words from start to finish. I really enjoyed seeing the people, appreciating the buildings and mostly the confessional admission within the piece. Fab write. H🌷