-
Harriet-Jacqui xx wrote a new post
-
CasketSharpe wrote a new post
4 Comments -
Harriet-Jacqui xx wrote a new post
2 Comments -
PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post
9 Comments-
You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.
-
Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
-
I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
Truly enjoyed
-
-
Crimsin wrote a new post
6 Comments-
great stuff, you two. Done just right. Plenty of descriptive moments to build the character into an active existence.
-
- Load More Posts
My Friends
Logan Clark
@ganlo
Aaron Lion Heart
@aaronlionheart
AnnaM44
@annamarie44
Aldo Kraas
@poetaldo256
Sam Dickens
@sammyd
Groups
Unsung Underground
Private Group
News and Suggestions
Public Group
National Poetry Month
Public Group
My Recent Posts

A Deathly Stare
- April 7, 2026

Empathy
- March 31, 2026
Location
West Yorkshire, United Kingdom





This sounds like the person is torn up about being cheated on that they are lashing out at everyone. Its best to keep them away then to have them close so they do not hurt you. That’s what I see.