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Wonderfully done, Wally. Your rhyme scheme is clever and precise. And the write flows very well. Plus the message itself is almost serene with it’s approach.
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This is interesting. It has a turn of the century vibe to me for some reason. Like someone standing in a crowd, but the only person getting the whole scenario’s message from the one on stage. Your use of powerful words makes it impactful, but not bloated. Great job Crims.