I could relate to this poem. It’s not “stupid”. We all fall for “fictional” men and women.

I love the way you use repetition in this piece, and the rhyme is really nice. I like the message. Fictional men have no faults, so they are easy to fall for. It reminds me of an old song called Imaginary Lover by Atlanta Rhythm Section.

Brilliantly penned, my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

I feel it could be a lot lengthier.

And thank you 😊

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Can’t fix what ain’t broken my friend. Perfect as is. Appreciate you.

Damian

Also,inspired off Alec Benjamin’s single, “”Water Fountain”.

Beautifully penned. Appreciate you.

Damian