Rosie C

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May 3, 2025

Bled out.Life left me, time to head for check out.Can’t shout.Wife left me, no doubt she took the same route.Nothing but strangers in this crowd...Red pools reflecting clouds and planes.Another bloody out-of-body experience.Mudded by heavy rains. Speeding through these...

5 Comments

Damian DeadLove
1 year, 3 months ago

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Vivid imagery an incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
DampKitten
1 year, 3 months ago

Remind me not to get in a car with you! Wow, it took me a hot minute to figure out what was happening. I love the rhyme you use – feels like an antagonistic relationship peaking with a bad turn. I like how you explore the moment of death, the voiceless reality of finality… except, I can hear you.
- Drieks
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Haha you’ll be safe, I promise!
  
  I put this on paper when I heard about it on the news.
  The husband tried to end their lives because he found out she cheated on him.
  
  I wrote this piece from her perspective at first but, even though I despise the husband, writing it from his point of view came across way more powerful in my opinion.
Nick DC
1 year, 3 months ago

Love the flow and vibes. Great ink
- Drieks
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you for the kind words Nick!