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    I Forgot.

    I usually don't. But this time, I did, and I still have the scars to prove it. She slammed the door and walked out of the house. By the time I ran to catch her, she pulled out of the...

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    • You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol

    • Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.

      xx ~P.G💋

      • what calendar ??? OMG there are calendars to remind us of those stuff???? crap…

    • Hoi hoi
      Love this one a lot. Really good write.
      The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.

      Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
      If you are not going to do it, I will.
      Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?

      I’ll be on the look out for your next.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • No I haven’t thought of writing that song… You are welcome to do it… I just need some time to heal after that birthday door slamming

    • That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.

    • im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me

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    Befallen

      In keeping with every ancient lore I confess my love to the one I adore.  You took my heart and made it soar diving through every celestial shore.  The angels cried for a long lost soul stripped naked to his minimal core.  He wanted to...

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    thirst

    somber need bleeding in my soulconjuring the evil in meyou seek redemption in my bloodnever to cry I won't even feel my deathyou'll never touch the honesty of meand for that I'm gratefulinflicted dread I release, may it find...

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    • So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.

      • good mornig dearest Keith I’m happy you liked it I was worried I went too far but I never worried about that before why start now right? thank you my friend ❤️

    • Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.

      • hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you ❤️

    • hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️

    • Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    dreamer

    squanders the day wandering through my thoughtsjumping from one cloud to another with none to sustain methen falling into the darker crevices where I begin dreamingthat's when I feel them, the demonsmy soul shrinks back and I gather my...

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    • As we read this we think of our darkness and how it hungers always for more. We constantly watched for the slightest weakness, even inattention is a weakness. But to have it’s icy call within our darkness and acceptance, deeelish

      • hello dearest Me I think of the parst of space that are empty I find peace there it is a heavy dark… there I can be myself I go wandering…someday when I pass from this dominion I hope to explore other plains of existence thank you so much for you very apt comment ❤️

    • Hoi hoi Chère C.,
      Love the write.
      And love the artwork too.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • hello dearest Gus good evening thank you most graciously I love the picture as well I thought it went well with the poem ❤️

    • This reads more like a short story then a poem. I love it. The darkness and moodiness crawls into my skin. As I read, I love the atmosphere you created with your words and with the image. Marvelous Brenda. xo

      • good morning dearest Keith I think you’re right I should have listed it as a series it well be part of a bigger story thank you gracioulsy for taking in the mood ❤️

    • Father, I confess to ink the silence, haunting the moonless nights. Well done, Brenda.

      • thank you graciously dearest Adagio for a very beautifully poetic comment ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    perpetuity with the talented Adagio

    with confusing dark my artistry comes forthto wrap around and conjure you forthmy fate dealt I think to take you with me assaulted desire weepsin the salty rain reapthe lovely flowers of the field grin for the sake of heavenwho is...

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    • Thank you for allowing my ink to splatter, Brenda. I don’t know why we don’t team-up more often. My dirge is available even in the throes of my tuna casserole.

      • hello dearest Adagio it’s always a pleasure to write with you and we will do more collaborations I’m sure I’m really pleased how this one came out thank you ❤️

    • This is good. The flow is nicely done. Nice job to both of you.

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