Powerfully penned, PAR. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. This is next level brilliant my brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

As Executive Secretary for 20 years, I was nodding vigorously at your description of the actual work. The organizer, thumb on the pulse, fingers in the files. My boss called me the “Real Boss.” Taken in that context, this is brilliant for that alone. Death is too small for me…damn…

Oh wow, what a piece. I mean, the flow of it and the constant reiteration doesn’t wish me dead, just seemed the whole thing.

Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))

Another steamy masterpiece, you may disappear but when you return, it’s turnt up

Passionately penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend this is fire here. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian