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    Man In Multitudes

    Here comes the man of mirrorsThe mirrors on the man mirroring the roomWith the furniture having a conversationA painting on the wall:A horse trampling a bouquette of flowers Horses in me, and out of me, trampling the soul. A hand of...

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    • hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️

      • I believe my poems are a part of me. They come from my subconscious. 🙂
        Thank you my friend for reading and support! Highly apprecited! <3

    • Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)

    • This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?

      Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.

      • Thank you brother for reading and the comment. Also for both the correction and exclude tag. I appreciate it! “)

    • This is quite mind-blowing.

      I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.

      I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.

      It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.

      A pleasure to take in. x

    • Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.

    • That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.

    • A great mystery unfolds. The nature of the muse.
      Regards James

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    Quick Update 2

    The issue has been resolved. You can post your work. Thank you

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    Quick Update

    Some of you are having problems with publishing your work. We are aware of this and are working on it. Sorry for the inconvenience

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    The Revenant

    strange it wasthe outcome...yeah?making covenant with the governmenta bureaucratic cabalpreaching change is gonna comechildren of lesser godskept you at odds  pre-occupied  slow cooked like that framed frog   while you over-lookedthe hand up Mona Lisa's skirtbartering idealism for dirt sans Eden didn't see the...

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    • Your pen has power, Naajir. You weld it like a trident of discourse. Because you see that discourse and use it against itself.
      Always well spoken with a keen wisdom.

      • This was one of those vibes that started one way but ended up
        on a more inspirational tone. I like those moments.
        Big thx for such a profound comment, Styxian

        Much respect

        Naaj

    • Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. This has a flow that would make great song lyrics. Nicely done per usual brother. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • You read my mind in regards of putting it into song format. I’ve been in and out if Suno
        and I like how they piece things together. Big thx for droppin by, Damian.

        Much respect

        Naaj

    • We read this thinking of all the people now wanting to claim innocence, The supporters of Nero and Caligua who supported the emperor even after discovering their madness. The mad rulers campaign on their sickness and still found themselves in power. There is no depth to the madness, you lose yourself using the normal routes to navigate. Tight

      • Great analysis, bro. We gotta stay grounded in our covenant in times like this
        Thx or droppin in.

        Much respect

        Naaj

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    heathen

    touching the darkness I enter into your domainpolite as alwaysthe wards at the door take note of meswirls the heathen mistshedonistic smoke heavy in the airenchanted honesty in a lookour eyes make contactit is almost too powerfulthe intenity of...

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