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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Blue Pool
A young man sipped limoncello, in a bar in the village square,
He was lonely and heartbroken, you would often find him there,
His heart was filled with sorrow, he felt twisted and torn inside,
When a waitress in a black dress, came and whispered as he cried,
‘Do you know there’s a blue pool, born out of the mountain str…Read More![]()
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Better safe than sorry, so no sorries, please! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Curly Grace and
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
This was touching to me. Tugged at my heart Fia.
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Thank you Brandon:))
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There’s a lot of people feeling like this these days, Fia. I can relate.
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Yes, there are. Thank you Tim:))
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Excellent write Fia …straight from your heart into mine.
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Thank you Peter;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write that gives me musing vibes my friend. You know how I dig your musings. Amazing work as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes definitely a musing vibe cuz. Thank you Damian 😊
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This is very real. Truthful and strangely uplifting.
Regards
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Thank you, Knight;))
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That last line is a stone dropping into the pond. Solid slap of reality. Doesn’t stop us reaching, does it?
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No it doesn’t. We keep going. Thank you Willow 😊
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Read MoreI watched the thread,slip from my fingers,cold as steel. I couldn’t hold the end,or trace the start. Like a shadow in alleys,following the hunt,its shadow in my chest,too swift to name. I watched the threadthrough the silence. You can only sensewhen nothing stirs. I...
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Supposedly, if we look deep enough inside ourselves we’re bound to find the answers that haunt us. I for one have never had much luck with that. All I find are more questions and a murky shadow.
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A lot of us find shadows instead of answers when we look inward. Your comment captures that feeling well, Tim.
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Powerfully penned, CG. Another excellent write with deep layers, and dark undertones hiding in the shadows my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Truly appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
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Read MoreThe warning didn’t comewith sirens or lights. It came quietly,a shift in the air,a stillness settlinglike dust before a storm. The horses grew restless,pacing the fence line,ears toward somethingI could not yet see. Even the cowslifted their heads,watching the horizonas if it...
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I have never been in the path of a tornado. But I have been in my share of storms that I should have listened to clear out. Strongly felt piece
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Thank you, Fia. Those kinds of storms leave their own mark, don’t they?
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Animals have that sense about them we don’t. You’ll often see cats and dogs react moments before an earthquake. Great picture and poem here.
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You’re right, Tim. Animals always seem to sense what we try to ignore. My dogs know before me.
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Powerfully penned, CG. Excellent write with precise imagery my friend. Outstanding visuals as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, that means a lot. I’m grateful the visuals spoke to you the way they did. Appreciate you, truly. 🙂
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While I fancy myself a romantic, I think I will avoid this Blue Pool. I have loved a few times and may never love again, but I think I do not want to play the fool. Her pool is enticing, her lips warm with arousal, but dear lady, I will remain on this stool. Sorry HJx, I hope you don’t mind where my mind went as I read your poem. -Curt