Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.

John

Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear

A practiced tone

That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”

Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.

Nicely written

Naaj

I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.

Yes! I agree, let’s make sure those we love know how much we treasure them, while there is time.

Admittedly I struggled to read this through. The emotion is so incredibly palpable here, each word a pang of familiar grief.

If this is a personal loss for you – condolences , myfriend.

Clay

Heartbreaking…

A thought shared by all for someone. 🌼

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A mother’s love is unconditional my friend. Truly am sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks for reading.
There may be more to come. Memories are funny things. There is much more I could write. When the mood is right. This is a series I am thinking of making. I have a novella I need to finish first. I am thankful for you kind words.
Regards
James

Hi,
I”ll give you the run down. Currently I have
a series of scifi novellas, one short novel, all from the same series. I’ll send you the links if you like no worries if not.
Regards
James

You wouldn’t be knowing anyone like that would you? Enjoyed this my friend, always clever with your words 🌼

wrote this poem about me shes a wonderful, beautiful,and talented one of a kind woman

“a lovely hellion of sorts don’t mess with her” love that line.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding. Your words captivate Brenda. Marvelous!!