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Remind me not to get in a car with you! Wow, it took me a hot minute to figure out what was happening. I love the rhyme you use – feels like an antagonistic relationship peaking with a bad turn. I like how you explore the moment of death, the voiceless reality of finality… except, I can hear you.
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Haha you’ll be safe, I promise!
I put this on paper when I heard about it on the news.
The husband tried to end their lives because he found out she cheated on him.I wrote this piece from her perspective at first but, even though I despise the husband, writing it from his point of view came across way more powerful in my opinion.
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Vivid imagery an incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
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