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Many thanks, you found the thread running through time and kindly accepted the truth of my words. There is a future to come but with pauses for self reflection. More than that, I don’t know yet! Patience or adventure!?
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I just found this… Oh! You write, such indigo between lines.
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weirdly, this reminds me of someone that i used to love, from afar.
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Read MoreUpon the sharpest Hook moon of fright Answering the call Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this Rusted metal shed Surrounded by misted Red air of dread Remnants of lovers From who I...
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Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
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Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol
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Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
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I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien!
I enjoy fantasy horror.
I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.Thanks for checking this out amigo!
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Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂
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Tis the season Tim!
Now I need a huge bag of Snickers and Twix! HahahaLater gator!
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Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈⬛🖤🐧😎👍
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Nev, amigo!
When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)-
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You can beat an egg and a drum but you can’t beat a Twix can ya eh’ 😎👍
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Oh! This is good.
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Thank you!
I wanted it to sound like a dark tale from Disney. lol
Hope that made sense!
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Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.
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Thank you! It was fun to write!
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An interesting write, suitable for the season.
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Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!
I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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Read MoreThe action takes place in a bathroom. The actor, an average looking man or woman wearing casual contemporary clothing, will be addressed from this point as ACTOR. Dependent upon the size of the stage and the budget, another room...
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I can see why there is silence and then applause. It is poetic the way she decided to leave this earth the moment she arrived, but still, that is something. I like sending it to the senator, showing what happens to people with budget cuts to needed medications and research for a cure.
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Thank you, Fia. It was a trip performing this, especially at the end. The first time I did it the crowd just sat there, silent. I thought, oh, fuck! I guess I’ll never do this one again. Then someone started to clap, then another, then everyone was applauding — but not very loud. And I understood.But that was a hellofa time, very scary, especially for the people who had been infected. A sure death penalty, very slowly.
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I read this late last night and had to log off before I commented.
This is intense. For as dark as it is it has a lot of intimacy.
Through you the audience got to know her and in turn care about her.
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Thank you. I do appreciate the comment. I was in the middle of writing a message to you about “Pretty Eyes” when I got your notification.
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Well it’s a good thing I got two!! lol
Thank you
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A bit macabre, here. Quite appropriate for this time of year. Poe might be jealous. Very good writing, I’d say.
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Why, Sam, you say the sweetest things. Thanks, buddy.
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Emma, this is a well narrated story of the history of your writer’s life where college took you. This glimpse into the past was quite stimulating to read. I loved how the life events unfolded and reading this story that felt like an entry for a memoir.
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