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Read MoreGhost ShipBy FlatDaddyI found a shipA mighty thing it wasA massive mast that touched the skyEvery oaken plank self carved Rigging unspoiled coiled upon the deck, untrodden, helm untouched, Yet, curious, every sail was made from...
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Thanks, Fia. I am so glad you like the line breaks. I feel that, with certain writes, visual presentation can be important to how the piece is perceived. This is one of those.
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I caught the curse vibe in this.
It slowly built up like a possession of his mind and actions
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Why, thank you so much! I don’t believe we’ve met, so I would like to return the favor. Is there anything of yours in particular you are most proud of? Feel free to message me, or answer here.
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This is a right good salty tale, especially so since it comes from an Air Force dude. (Makes me a bit jealous, it does) Never see the shore again? I know the feeling, but here’s a tip–if you look to that fluid horizon at night, you will often see tiny lights.
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I thank you, Sam, and yes, I have seen those lights, wondered briefly what they were, a fleeting thought — but did they notice?
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Rock on, Love this crimsin
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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
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Fantastic!
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
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I love the rock god!!!
So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
Cheers to the darkness!-
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hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
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I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
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hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
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hi dearest Keith forgive me for missing your comment thank you my friend ❤️
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Really intense images.
I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.I both admire and fear witches.
Regards James
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he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
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A wonderful write Crimsin. I hope you have a spectacular day this day.
Bat
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hello dearest Bat thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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Read MoreArrived hand in handNo standing in line Got our backstage passLet’s make it lastNo stadium seatingOutside beneath the stars. Music’s ready to start We’re downing crown & cokeHe steps a little closerI’m moving a little slowerNah we should go fasterBaby...
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Fine, Metallica it is, when next we bed together. What!
I prefer Black Sabbath, but that’s some dark shit. I’ll get all trippy on ya. LOL -
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Promises promises.
But I prefer to listen to Taylor Swift! Hahaha
As long as I’m with you it doesn’t matter:)
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this is badass beautiful Adelphina and we both about rockers tonight… this is really cool ❤️
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Thank you Crimson! My first concert was Aerosmith.
When the song Train Kept A Rolling came on the crowd went crazy!!
Left a lasting impression.Thank you for stopping by lovely:)
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Haha this is so cool. I can not tell you how many mosh pits erupt at the last Metallica concert I went to. From opening bands
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Hahaha. I just moved out of the way. lol.
I love all the anarchy of it. Music has a way of taking you there!!!
Thank you for the snaps!! Woop Woop!!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Gotta love a musical write that appreciates the mosh pit! Excellent work my friend. I knew Mark would bring up Sabbath! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Of course he’d bring up Sabbath. Hahaha
He’s not a swifty fan, so I had to tease him about it. lolThis was a fun write.
I had the whole scene in my head playing out.Thanks for your snaps amigo!!
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Girl, this has so much spirit in it. Sometimes the “just for fun” ones actually light up the room. Big smiles all around on this one.
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Hi Willow!! Long time no see chica:)
I’m so happy you stopped by for a comment!
This one kind of wrote itself. I love when that happens. That high is addicting! lol
And that it made you smile is a bonus:)Thanks for stopping by!
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I like the breaks of “and yet” This is great theme for this month, I enjoyed this.