hello dearest James a very beautifully succint poem I think we are on similar wavelengths today 💕

This felt so calm and balanced without having to use a lot of words to explain everything.

Nice work as usual🙏

I feel the sun and the moon with this. Very nice

Thanks for reading.
The sun and moon are always with us.
Regards James

How can there be one without the other? The unity in diversity is incredible. Beautifully written…

Did not know sharks are older than Saturn’s rings. Figures, they are rulers of their domain. This is an interesting piece like the underwater theme. I feel that you are bringing attention to the destruction of the oceans. At least that is what I am getting from this,

hello dearest poet I love the way you wove the rhythm with the words it sounded like an old pirate… sharks terrify me I have had nightmares of being lost at sea swimming among them but I guess I should fear the land sharks more great write 💕

The flow of this…pardon the pun…is amazing. There’s calm & destruction found in the depths of the ocean. Definitely will be returning to read this again

Aww that the plea in the asking is precious

you do everytime I read you I am brimming with your essence 💕

Passionately penned, Daniel. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian