What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

John

Dude the pic alone deserves a host of comments, there’s nothing wrong with letting it mature a little. Tight work

You so have to watch out for those old ones. They can put some shit on you.

So much sadness in this. I wish I could say I’ve never felt that but it wouldn’t be true. Take care, Daniel.