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Read MoreHave you ever found yourself having a dream Where you couldn’t quite figure out the place or time? Like old faces you’ve seen or places you’ve been And yet something along the way doesn’t align? It’s not really a nostalgic trip down memory...
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Thank you Fia. I know I’m not the only one and yet the familiarity of something unknown can be a little confusing and amusing. Perhaps the parallel universe of our other selves, or just our brains needing some good sleep.
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hello Wally yes I have on a lot of occassions strangers I apparently know in the dream is often or my home being another house I seemed to live in this sleep state that doesn’t align with the present… some of my past lives were apparently disturbing if my dreams are to be believed great write ❤️
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Crim, great to hear from you. Yes, its as if the subconscious is sending messages across time and we’re reliving moments that don’t align. That’s why I love listening to music while writing.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. You’re definitely not alone my friend, I can relate. Excellent write. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Yes, I like that in a way this can be relatable to many. It means that universe is talking to us and we poets are the ones to capture these momentary lapses of thoughts and time.
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Read MoreCasketSharpe “Like a mother and her teenage daughter crossing the border Money and pussy will become payment, but not in that order, “Knowingly, with a no good motherfucka they made a deal Now on a dirty mattress one of them is...
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Read MoreThe weather is disgusting. Slushy. Dirty snow slush has been underfoot for a week now. It's as if whoever is in charge of the weather up there got tired and decided to take a nap. And this fog is...
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Unsettling and very depressing, Dmitry. All those post-apocalyptic stories are horrid in their own way, but this was extra painful as the main characters were kids. Your story reminded me of the movie The Blue Lagoon from 1980. Two teenagers stranded on a deserted island and tried to cope with the situation the best they could. They even had a baby of their own, and at some point they saw no other way out, and decided to end their lives by eating some poisonous berries …
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Thank you! I love evoking emotions in readers.
But in “The Blue Lagoon” (part two), the heroes actually survived. In my story – no. No chance 😉
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I agree with Al this was unsettling. Well written and conveyed allot not leaving the mind to wonder what happened next.
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Thank you 🙂
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