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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
State of Mind:
Dear Danny,
I sit alone behind these grey concrete walls, wondering if the Police really know it all?
Craving just a little male affection when all I seem to get is your rejection?
Write me letters, pick up the phone, need your sweetness, so sick of living here on my own.
I loved you, baby, you loved me, said I loved ya, it…Read More![]()
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Read More**A Complaint to You** I complain about you— about this life we are living now, about the way we drift through days without knowing how. When you care, you must also give— for what is love if not the courage to live? I complain about you again, for giving...
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Nice write. I like the continuation of reasons that you stacked in the stanzas. It works well. Solid writing.
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Hi, thank you for your review. Your encouraging reply is great effort in making me a better writer.
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Curly Grace posted in the group National Poetry Month
Unraveling
I watched the thread,
slip from my fingers,
cold as steel.I couldn’t hold the end,
or trace the start.Like a shadow in alleys,
following the hunt,
its shadow in my chest,
too swift to name.I watched the thread
through the silence.You can only sense
when nothing stirs.I felt tremors pulse
through skin, t…Read More![]()
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I was just thinking the other day of all the ways of saying and meanings for unravel. This is a potent expression of it 😊
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Lizz wrote a new post
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Read MoreLet me introduce myself. I’m Lizz. Not a brand. Not a filtered highlight. Not a polished biography written for someone else’s approval. Just Beth. Friendly in a world that rewards cold. Easy-going in rooms thick with ego. Kind when it would be easier to harden. Patient when storms test...
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Well, you have laid it all out and if anyone had any questions, they need to read this again. Nicely put.
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Thanks 😊
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Unapologetically penned, Lizz. This is a powerful and honest write my friend. We all have ups and downs in our journey as writers, taking accountability and living to tell the story is what keeps us putting pen to paper. That’s just my opinion though. Excellent work here. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you I try to stay as honest as possible
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Very cool. It places you in front of a crowd, that you are not fearful of. I enjoy self-empowering writes. it isn’t egotistical, it’s affirmation of your worth. Well done.
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Thank you 😊
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It’s plain to see you’re a serious and articulate writer. You’re able to express yourself astutely and with no reserves. I envy your unapologetic courage. Great write here.
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Thanks. I’ve been writing as a young teen, and as a teen I had no one to talk to, to express myself so I turned to poetry it was the only way for me to get things out. Though through time I’ve become better at my poetry. And I keep it as real as possible.
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Willow wrote a new post
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Read MoreI can hear my phone buzzing on the dresser across the room like a fly...dogging my face it's distracting as I give myself over ...in every possible sense... to his ferocious ministrations his smoky eyes burning holes in my soul setting my nerve endings ablaze flickers spreading quickly a...
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Ok..ok. Now I need the ice water. Wow
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He’s got a way about him…😂 Thank you, Fia
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Yo! I am reading your poem and its FIRE!! Call me when you get this. Bye “)
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Haha thanks! 😊
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Passionately penned, Willow. This excellent write heats up the room my friend. To the readers wearing glasses I’m sure they’re all steamed up reading this one. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I had a moment here with this one, but he’s potent inspiration. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Sexy! XXX Nice work
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Thank you! 😊
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A hot, breathless rush… interruption eclipsed by desire, ending on a perfect, wry snap.
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Yeah……what she said.
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And thank you, Brandon 😊
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Thank you, Grace! 😊
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My draft I see AI couldn’t express so well my emotional thoughts.
I complain about you for the life
Which we are seeing now
When you care you also need to give
I complain about you that you are giving much fun than freaking life which you are of with
I complain now about you that your responsibility has risen with much sacrifice to give to make mom and dad to be a dad as like dad and mom care and sacrifice.
I do because you are wasting a dollar for every second and you are not saving a dollar every second.
I beg your pardon for seeing the life what we are going through I must say complaints to you about your self because we ended up with no control of mom and dad…..
Jessy Jacob ❤️