-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
goldenmyst wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreWhere the Magnolia Sings and My Mother Keeps the Moon in a Jar - Part One The air in New Orleans during the summer of 1973 didn’t just sit; it breathed. It was a heavy, velvet presence, smelling of damp...
4 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Glad you liked my opening my friend. Indeed it was at least two pages. Yes the boy in the story liked bossy women who kept him in line. They excited him. Thank you so much for reading my friend. He is just discovering his submissive feelings. This is the beginning of his femdom interests.
John
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
You have a really nice writing Style I’ve always enjoyed. I like the contrast between Sonia and the mother. In a world of wonderment, a little boy finds his first crush. It’s an ideal life of wonder and amazement. I believe if there was a hundred dollar bill in his pocket he would have given it to her. lol
The mother has wisdom enough to know where his feelings will be in years to come.
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
I can’t thank you enough my friend. I am thrilled by your apt and keen observations on this story. Truly you have captured its essence in your review. I am deeply appreciative. Indeed love that comment if there was a hundred dollar bill in his pocket he would have given it to her. lol. Priceless. Indeed I am sure he would have given it to her. And yes truly the mother knew how his feelings would evolve and already were. Thank you so much. 🙂
John
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Angel Louise]()
Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
it’s true those are vital to a healthy relationship thank you graciously ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Rosie C]()
I can sense a shattered emotional connection.
Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.
Healing is what matters the most going forward. x
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello lovely Rosie it’s true but sometimes there is no healing I’m schizophrenic and as such I have always accepted less than… thank you for the love on this write ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreBig Tech is the biggest of thieves,Pinched our attention, then rolled up their sleeves.No thought for our minds or mental health,So long as the clickbait fattens their wealth.They care not for children, no matter the cost,Infinite scrolling on meaningless...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is felt. The mindless scrolling for children at a time when the mind is developing. Good one
-
![Profile picture of Rosie C]()
Very straight to the point.
I agree, AI is taking over faster than it appears.
A splendid read. x
-
-
![Profile picture of D. Ignatov]()
D. Ignatov and
Cipher are now friends
![]()
![Profile Photo]()
-
- Load More Posts
Rather the stick huh? A firm hand to keep in line. this is a good opening to this. this felt like I read two full pages here.