I’ve never tried to trace back how long ago withes emanated from the past. This poem shows the power that one can have when it comes to lust. Something as old as time itself.

Nice one Crimsin, with great picture that conjures up the mystique of the poem.

Well hell you were feeling upset with this one and you let them have it. Strong piece, like it

I admire your anger throughout this piece.

I bet this was an emotional release for you. A well needed one.

I enjoyed the strong use of rhymes, it added to the poetic flow.

A Solid and captivating read. x

you sound like an instrument of destruction here dearest Keith I love it ❤️

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend this is vintage you in your element here! You’ve been missed brother. Appreciate you.

Damian