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Read MoreI. I lent wings to the boy-angel, or something like wings and he tried to fly, or something close to it, or maybe fly later, but the sky kept freezing, freezing, and he kept saying “I’m going up, going down, resending,” like a clause...
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I’ve being trying my best lately, thank you for the read and comments.
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Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brother, thank you for the read and comments.
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This piece has become liturgically and surgically well-constructed.
I don’t believe in angels, but they do exist. Thank you all. -
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PAR you are a great writer. Always pushing the envelope with your poetry. Nice work.
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You’re the best, Keith!
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I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
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Thank you a lot, poets know all the attempts at flying.
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This one is for, Fia Naturie. Eddie had other singles, and even learned to play guitar. This one has a reggae vibe.
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Oh my God. I did not here this one. Thank you
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You’re most welcome. I’m smiling big right now. This is the gift of being into a lot of music and music history my friend. Sometimes I get to introduce somebody to a song they didn’t know existed. Appreciate you, cuz.
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Its cool
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It’s a good song as well. I bought “Red Light” when it dropped. Enjoy cuz.
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Definitely
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Damian DeadLove posted in the group Music is Art
“I cannot get there from here, baby
And I don’t care where I’m goin’
Here’s to your thin red line
I’m stepping over.”David Lee Roth
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That line is do in your face. Im stepping over it.
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Yes it is..
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Rick James produced and wrote the song. He also appears in the video.
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Yes he did i thought he would have been more in the song instead of the back ground. Its still a good song
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He was giving Eddie his moment to shine. Rick was already established. Ode fact: Rick James and Neil Young were in a band together called the Mynah Birds. Circa: 1964 to 1967. They did not release an album though.
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That’s interesting
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Read More(4 verses) You and your immaculate persona, veiled by a silence that no one complains about, a worn-out icon of impossible purity, still sharp as antique glass. (6 verses) You and the witch that inhabits your heart, cold as fire that doesn't touch the skin, a wound...
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wow dearest Par this is deep those damn witchy entities never sure of their purpose grear write ❤️
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For sure never sure of their purpose… Witches.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. This is a truly amazing write my friend, always love the depth of your work brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love you, my friend!
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So many awesome lines, wrapped together into a solid poem. It is truly art, Paulo. Your writes are always intriguing to me.
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thanks, my dear friend.
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You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.