Even though this is not finished, it packs a punch. Very good you two

Thanks!

No one’s world is a straight line. Nicely written

hello beautiful Green we are all snow flakes one of a kind lovely write 💕

Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Tight rhyming, well done Damian.

Superb poet you are, Damian. Love your work. Bravo!

Daniel

”It’s for the love of the write I’m still here”

I can vibe a whole poem to this alone, my bro
It all resonates with me.

Much respect

Naaj

That last stanza Damian took home for me. Nice

This is such a powerhouse of writing. That last stanza seriously resonated with me. Especially that last freaking line. Mic drop, my friend

Oh,,,damn. This is intense and I can feel the rage. Love it. Thank you, Paula

Far far from a regular write. It got some anger out writing it down and I laughed a bit. Thanks for the inspiration.

Amazing write…..amazing woman.

🙏

Thanks.

You honor me. Teddy distilled intanible feelings that are common to generations into visceral principles. I merely ramble in my own way on common themes, though not many would slough through one of my rambles.🌼

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, especially on the lines you’ll really felt. I.believe your right about, “seek she who can lead to remembrances.”

If one had to describe themselves to another without stating profession, education, faith system, political leanings, family or organizational relationships, what word would describe one’s self best? Would it be lover, fighter, friend, peace keeper, or something else? I am a seeker.