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Best prove what you cannot do before you discover what you can! Fine writing, thoughts distinguishable from maybe but not quite sure!
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If you created the clouds, you understand what they mean not need to read them
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Read MoreYou touched my heart today And the memory made me smile I wish that you had been here too To share that smile with you You come in unexpected ways Sometimes soon or in a while And an imprint on my heart is made And soul...
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This made me think of my dad. He’s gone but still here in my heart, in smiles & in laughter especially. This is beautiful
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I think we all have that special someone for whom time and distance doesn’t matter to the heart 🌼
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We all long for a love the heart remembers at random times and whiles, as if it was new 🌼
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Indeed 🌼
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I’m sure it’s a quote from someone but I’m too lazy to google it right now and see but this reminded me of the sentiment, ‘those we love never truly leave us’.
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In life or death, true love knows no bounds. At least, that’s my belief 🌼
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This makes me think of the song “I’ll be there”, by The Escape Club.
“On the edge of a waking dream
Over Rivers
Over Streams
Through Wind and Rain
I’ll be there
Across the wide and open sky
Thousands of miles I’d fly
To be with you
I’ll be there”-
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Just gave it a listen. The song wasn’t on my radar when the poem was written but I can understand being able to relate the two. I set words free into the ether and then sit back and watch as each gives their own connections to the words. Some things I’ve really worked over and liked barely received a blip of reaction. Some things have just come to me and I never gave a second thought to, and got raved over by comparision.
I liked this because it was short and sweet, spoke volumes in a pint size, and rhymed – which is a struggle for me, so I guess the stars aligned. For me it had nothing to do with death at all, but i can understand that too. Once you’ve set something free it takes on a life of its own. And that’s as it should be.
Thank you stopping to share a comment and the song 🌼
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You’re welcome. You are very talented.
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Thank you, what a wonderfully generous compliment. And I look forward to hearing more penned from your creative mind🌼
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Dear AJ,
Oh, you’re welcome. You know how I enjoy touching your heart especially when candy is involved. 🤭
I’m always gobsmacked by my own response when I read something that will stop and make me think how I can be better at being more generous. For me, this write had me thinking just that. Have I been generous especially with those I love? I really enjoyed the tenderness of this piece. Lovely write, as per. H🌷
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Well, now that everyone knows who my muse was, it makes me wonder why you told me to just keep it anonymous!
But you’re here now, so there’s no point in pining on about you with a silly poem – I’ve missed you!Btw…You haven’t seen my Recchiuti Confections Black Box chocolates have you? Just wondering. I can’t seem to find them anywhere? 🌼
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I said Accurate, not anonymous. 🙄😂
I know nothing about a delicious chocolate covered caramel in the Recchiuti Confections Black Box hiding behind the coffee tin.😳 🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🥰
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Green wrote a new post
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The presents but the thinest wisp between future and past, and only vagabond and gypsy souls seem to live life as it is.
Well done 🌼
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Ahhh, Dear Green 🌿
With every creative word your knowing hand, heart, and mind lays upon the page, a lasting part of your spirit is imbued within it, and an entire work of artful imagery, emotion, and metaphorical magic fashions a litany of life that will breathe for eternity, in the annals of poetic wonderment.
And, to physically preserve these works of wonderment, publish them, that they will be held in the eyes, hearts, and hands of those who will survive and keep you and your unique writings alive for as long as they shall live, for as long as the Government Copyright Archives exist, along with every worldwide personal and public library, and every bookseller around the globe.
You’ll always be “her” and “here”, Dear Poetess, within my poetic heart, mind, and soul.
Paint-on and write-on, and keep that golden pen filled ‘n ready … we need your vibrant words forevermore! ⁓ Richard🖌I do so admire good Free Verse, and this is definitely “good”. 🍷
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The mind is always free. Nicely done,