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Read Moreis meant to undolike skin peeling away from time,like a name dissolving in the mouth. not to be readthe instant the gaze tries to fix it,but fails—gloriously. before it undoes itself, it is already noise,it is already absence,it is already the...
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Damian!!! Thanks.
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Paulo!! How are you? Marvelous piece of writing. Your poetry always keep me thinking & wondering, while I balance on the edge of my mind.
Peace!
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Insanity!!! Thanks.
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The ending is a rock through a window! No peaceful moment within this write. It has an edge throughout. Impactful.
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Styxian!!! Thanks.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreHIBERNATIONI have a windowless closetin my apartment that Isometimes lock myself inand use it as a deprivation chamber.I know that sounds weird butit shuts me off from all stimuli.Locks are on the inside.I have my knife with meI use...
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Closets and cemeteries are nice places for isolating yourself from the outside world.
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Paula
This is a similar themed piece to one I’ve been trying to write for ages.You’ve done a great job asking question about the decisions we make.
We both know every action starts with a thought and that’s where the mind comes into play.If we’re fully awake and listening,our minds will see what the consequences of our actions will be.
I for one try to remember “no harm to any sentient being”, not always easy do.
I believe if a person’s intentions are good then, regardless of the law or societal norms, their actions are good.I’ve preached enough, when all I wanted to say was….great write.
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Read MoreFALL CAR RIDEI was about 8 yrs old...Mommy and the stepdad decided to borrow a car and drive to Ohio. Probably to score pills and weed. Maybe worse.The exhaust was loud and thecar stunk. The inspection stickerswere 2 yrs...
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Damn Lenny spoiling peace again.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write per usual my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian