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Read MoreI didn’t have this link saved anywhere in my phone, so I wasn’t able to upload it here in the audio option, so I added it here. Please copy this link and listen...
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Hi Angels, Yeah he got a scholarship to come to America. We lost touch over the years, but I like to believe he made it out alive.
Thanks for looking and leaving your thoughts
Zazzles ☺️
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Wonderful, stirring write… could really feel it…
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Hello, thank you very much Libellule 🙂
Zazzles ❤️
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Your words swirled with the music in a tragic opera. I felt the sorrow in your heart for your friend born to be besieged in such a place. I can only imagine the horrors in these places. Your poem is a strong tonic to remind us of the tragedies unfolding on this planet.
John
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Absolutely John the stories he would tell me just broke my heart so I had to write about it. I’m glad you walked away. Feeling something from this poem.
Love you, my brother
always
Your sister, Jackie❤️❤️
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Beautifully penned, Zazzles. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI breathe in your fragrance and it becomes nostalgic, like a myth from a story book, I will bottle and bury it deep within my heart forever and always. Unmistakably, undeniably and undoubtedly, I love you, and as such...
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This is so beautiful
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Thank you Fia, I gotta say, I’m not much of a poet. I’m more of a short story writer. Of the poetry I’ve written over the years. This is actually one of my favorites. Thanks for looking and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate you Fia ❤️
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A phenomenal write. Well written. Lovely.
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Thank you so much Vision❤️
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What a wonderful interpretation Angels. Love is fragile and must be treasured.
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Adira, thank you for reading this poem and leaving your comment.
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This is one of the most powerful, tender, and passionately nostalgic love poems I have read. The word are filled with emotions and sadness yet also the loving expression of the keepsake of your heart. Truly one I will remember as the years progress. A deeply felt poem.
John
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Oh wow, I like how you described what he is leaving behind.