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Read MoreAt work today I couldn't help but notice the war pictures in my office men in uniform with guns in their hands in black and white photos and I couldn't help but think about you how you've seen the world at its cruelest in its most...
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Well it’s all true. I wanted to post a pic but I couldn’t fit it and I was excited to post this!
I didn’t want to try and figure it out.
I was jotting things down at work after lunch. Came home and wrote this.
I’m lucky to have found you too. It’s a two way street here pal!
Okay. Time to go to bed! I’m fixing to call you goodnight!I love you too!!
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You had us at St Augustine, you couldn’t had read us at DUP and not know we have tons of family there. We read this seeing Seminoles, and Spanish cannon offering freedom to runaways. Tight
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We went to go see the fountain of youth museum and they fired the cannon!
OMG Meme! It was awesome! Viva St. Augustine they shouted before they lit the cannon.
Had a great time and beautiful memories. You are so lucky to have family there. It’s beautiful.
That was my first visit. Hopefully with more to come.Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!
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Adelphina, I was expecting to read about a vacation to St. Augustine Florida but was so moved beyond words by the story that unfolded before my very eyes. Truly a treasure of a poem that I am most honored to read by you tonight. This is filled with everything great poetry is about. A gently scribed lovers passion of a poem.
John
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Hi John!
I jotted things down all day at work. Went home and got started writing.
I caught my small little typos – it’s vs its and fixed!!
I was in a rush to get the words down they slipped by me!
I’m glad you enjoyed :). And it’s nice to see you on my page.
I hope you have been well amigo:)Thanks for stopping by!
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Blimey A. This pulsed my heart a little bit faster. A great eulogy and metaphor to your love for each other.
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Hey Rob:)
It was time for me to show Mark some love. Our vacation was spectacular
so I used it for some inspiration.
This came to me at work and I was so excited to get home and write.
It was a beautiful place. Even went to the fountain of youth museum.Thanks for stopping by!
Stay cool amigo!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. An amazing poem about the love and memories you and Mark share. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damien,
Mark writes such lovely poems about love and I wanted to give him some back.
I sent him the draft before I posted and he texted me right back with an OMG! Lol
He was so thrown off he didn’t tell me about my two little typos that I just fixed. HahahaHave a great evening amigo.
Thanks for reading:)
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Read MoreMask, stitched out, of human skinCannibal, murderer, threatened......Using bones, of victims and preyChainsaw, main weapon, to slay There - is nothing - under - the mask Leatherface!!!!!! Cow-killer, in a meat, factoryWill do - what they tell him - to doDeformed, at...
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Appreciate the kind words. Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Classic movie and write my friend. Ed Gein inspired so many horror films, but this one was an epic masterpiece. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes he has. Thanks Damian.
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Thank you kindly.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Another classic write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the kind words.
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In discussing “Metropolis” as a horror film, we reveal not only the fears of the 20th century—mechanization, alienation, control but also the terrors that still haunt us: the loss of empathy, the rise of the machine, and the collapse of humanity in the face of the system. It is a silent, structural, and profoundly relevant horror.
Fantastic poem, Keith.
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Thank you my good friend Paulo. I appreciate the feedback.
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Read MoreIt's all for Ishtar, the sacrifice will soon be completeHe needs to find a virgin, for his Egyptian bloody feast He's gonna rip out her tongue, slice off her face, gouge out her eyesThe blood will continue to flowWhen it...
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I do remember this. this line always gets me “He’s obsessed with her death, obsessed with her blood, obsessed with her demise,”
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Thank you Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I see the festivities are in full swing for horror month. Amazing write per usual, you’re the Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HAHA! Thanks man.
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Read MoreYellow Atrocity Screams In the depth of night,when all is silent,I can hear you scream.It’s a blood screamnot from a dream butthe reality of human atrocity.This sound is yellow,the shade often seen hiding in shadow,or imagined while listeningto a morose...
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This is so empowering. We need to stop this.
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Hi Curt. I know I left a review for this poem on WC, but the message is so important, I’m glad you shared it here too.
The imagery on this piece is haunting- The yellow scream is so vivid, almost synesthetic image that makes human atrocity feel terrifyingly alive.
The way sound, color, and darkness intertwine lingers long after reading.
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It was a great vacation baby! And when I saw this title, I was expecting it to be more about that, and not about my Army years, etc.
I used to write little snippets of lines on whatever scrap paper I could find back then. It was my woo-sah thing. Nowadays we have computers and Ipads etc. My ol tablet was my go-to for years! It’s ancient and still works, like me. LOL
This is a beautiful gift, this write. I took it to heart, right beside where you reside already. You are incredible.
I know how lucky I am, to have found you. Or you snared me, whichever it was!!!
This is quite a write, babydoll. Dammit.