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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Diversity
Being a city boy
with Native roots,
I have always loved the feel
of cool, dew-laden grass
licking my toes;
the scent of pine needles
on the forest floor;
the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts
inside my heart,
I begin to see the balance of life.
We are, all of…Read More3 Comments-
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Thanks Navina, I am glad you found this poem enjoyable. It means a lot and I appreciate your comment
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Of course .. poetry is always good to read. My mind is always thinking so I write it down haha.
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Read MoreShe moves around with cautionNever knowing when "they" may appearParanoia has been setting inShe knows there realEveryone is telling her there notShe'll witness "them" from the corner of her left eye"They" look like little children whisperingAt times they'll look...
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Okay you know I am a scardy cat but this is good.
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Appreciate it Fia. Thank You!!
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Thanks for reading PAR.
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Read MoreGreetings (Fill in the persons name here)!Now that I have your attentionHere's what I'm going to do to youI'm gonna slam my left fist into your rib cageYou lift your arms to give me easier access to your ribs...
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There are beathing and there is decimation. Damn..
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Bring on the decimation! Thanks Fia.
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Read MoreNot just the kind that fogs glass,the kind that lingerseven after the water stops,curling into my skinlike it refuses to leave. A drop slid over my shoulder,and my breath caught, sharp, shallow,a tremor I did not try to hide.The heat...
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Breaking my shy rule here. This one just stopped me in my tracks. Speechless and searching for something cold to drink.
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Read MoreWhat do I do When no other can deliver What you do I was created especially for you I don't care what they say I never did anyway Come to me… Your the one I choose Honestly it can only be you No other will do No one knows...
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I love that this allows for no external input. It’s between you and them, nobody else invited.
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Right. Thank you Willow
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A poem of love and longing. Beautiful!
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Yes it is. Thank you M.E
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hello beautiful Fia this is very passionate something about the undertones were menacing or I’m reading it wrong powerful emotions ❤️
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Yes it has a little menace. Good catch. Thank you crimsin
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Aww this is sweet and salty! Haha
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Thank you Adel;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with passion and power my friend. Nicely done as always, great read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz,;))
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Nice! Simple and direct. The best kind of poetry for any day. I like that you chose to write this, and post it. Awesome!
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Thank you, Styxian;))
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Absolute commitment to another. Knowing you were created for them, the person of your choice, to be taken in ways that the world will never understand, nor do you care that they understand. If the other knows what love and heated passion is about, you shouldn’t have to wait long.
A very honest piece of writing, using precise words to deliver your wants, needs, and desires.
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Thank you so much, Randall;))
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Very good…. I love this part the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts… A beautiful metaphor.. like if a butterfly can sense our thoughts . I do feel they sense those things too. Nice work… Keep it up